Version 2 is WAY better than the first one, from the dye job on. I took George's advice and put the front stitching on the outside and it looks much better. I also added a little pocket for a pipe tool and cleaners. Once again, optical illusion as the pipe cleaners do not extend past the edge of the pouch.

Still don't know if I'd put my name on this and sell it, but it's at least good enough to give to a friend.